A blog created by the students and teacher at Mount Wachusett CC - Graphic and Interactive Design Department for the purposes of sharing and critiquing their artwork as a collaborative project.
Carl - A good choice for a stressful event! I see an avalanche to the left, and a successful climb celebration to the right. Is there a way to also indicate what could have gone wrong? Maybe a tumbling climber inside the avalanche? Your challenge will be to show 2 different outcomes of this stressful event, so you will need to show what could have gone wrong. Consider reworking the composition so that the avalanche is the main focus and the two different outcomes are equal as if it an go either way... maybe blended on top of each other so we can see them both as possible results... suggesting the audience has a choice... a good outcome or a bad one. Make sense? You might have to silhouette the celebration more closely and make the avalanche appear to dominate and threaten the scene. Well... you know how to add more snow now (after watching the wrap-up video this week). I will search in gettyimages.com for a large sized good pix of an avalanche for you, because the success of this image composite depends on it. Look for it coming to you in an email.
I like the concept, it makes sense, its a great idea where a disatarous outcome can become a rather happy one. I see the clock at the top and wondering if this can be brought more into the concept more, perhaps two clocks one on each side with same time/date on them? I think the clock is certainly worth keeping as it adds more to the story and tells the concept with out having to read about it.
This is actually well made for the concept you wanted to portray. wordlessly showing still images for time travel is no small feat, well done. Maybe give us a bit more of the clock on the top? It seems a bit pushed away.
Carl - A good choice for a stressful event! I see an avalanche to the left, and a successful climb celebration to the right. Is there a way to also indicate what could have gone wrong? Maybe a tumbling climber inside the avalanche? Your challenge will be to show 2 different outcomes of this stressful event, so you will need to show what could have gone wrong. Consider reworking the composition so that the avalanche is the main focus and the two different outcomes are equal as if it an go either way... maybe blended on top of each other so we can see them both as possible results... suggesting the audience has a choice... a good outcome or a bad one. Make sense? You might have to silhouette the celebration more closely and make the avalanche appear to dominate and threaten the scene. Well... you know how to add more snow now (after watching the wrap-up video this week). I will search in gettyimages.com for a large sized good pix of an avalanche for you, because the success of this image composite depends on it. Look for it coming to you in an email.
ReplyDeleteok thank you Coni
ReplyDeleteI like the concept, it makes sense, its a great idea where a disatarous outcome can become a rather happy one. I see the clock at the top and wondering if this can be brought more into the concept more, perhaps two clocks one on each side with same time/date on them? I think the clock is certainly worth keeping as it adds more to the story and tells the concept with out having to read about it.
ReplyDeleteThis is actually well made for the concept you wanted to portray. wordlessly showing still images for time travel is no small feat, well done. Maybe give us a bit more of the clock on the top? It seems a bit pushed away.
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