A blog created by the students and teacher at Mount Wachusett CC - Graphic and Interactive Design Department for the purposes of sharing and critiquing their artwork as a collaborative project.
Nice Photoshop work, on everything, the only problem I notice is the group of people silhouettes feat face our view. I think your intent was for them to be looking out the window. I suggest reflecting them in Photoshop to change their look. Great job on the added bar, it does really give the image that space traveling resort feeling.
Nicholas - I’ve just written my first thoughts on your next post, so you might want to read my feedback in that order (your first post first).
I really think “showing” aspects of what the ride would be like is a good concept. In this case I say add more people (or make the people bigger in the room), more chairs, more cool things along the edges of the room like the bar on left. I would rather be looking out a window on the right than at a steel wall. What about the ceiling… could that be a window too? Could we see nebula, shooting stars, etc out those? I say make this visual suggest an amazing experience of feeling like the audience is part of the cosmos!
Then, because this concept is very sustainable over a 3-part series, find other images of happy people sitting in rooms/environments where you could add windows and change backgrounds to suggest they are in outer space - surrounded by the beauty of the cosmos. Isn’t that why they would take this trip?
I used gettyimages.com and found a few images that I think you might be able to use. I’ll send you the link via email from studio ASAP.
Wow, sign me up. A bar, lounge area, huge view window, add a pool and I'd live up there. You could try playing with making shadows, the lack of them makes parts feel "placed". Well done on the concept though.
Nice Photoshop work, on everything, the only problem I notice is the group of people silhouettes feat face our view. I think your intent was for them to be looking out the window. I suggest reflecting them in Photoshop to change their look. Great job on the added bar, it does really give the image that space traveling resort feeling.
ReplyDeleteNicholas - I’ve just written my first thoughts on your next post, so you might want to read my feedback in that order (your first post first).
ReplyDeleteI really think “showing” aspects of what the ride would be like is a good concept. In this case I say add more people (or make the people bigger in the room), more chairs, more cool things along the edges of the room like the bar on left. I would rather be looking out a window on the right than at a steel wall. What about the ceiling… could that be a window too? Could we see nebula, shooting stars, etc out those? I say make this visual suggest an amazing experience of feeling like the audience is part of the cosmos!
Then, because this concept is very sustainable over a 3-part series, find other images of happy people sitting in rooms/environments where you could add windows and change backgrounds to suggest they are in outer space - surrounded by the beauty of the cosmos. Isn’t that why they would take this trip?
I used gettyimages.com and found a few images that I think you might be able to use. I’ll send you the link via email from studio ASAP.
Wow, sign me up. A bar, lounge area, huge view window, add a pool and I'd live up there. You could try playing with making shadows, the lack of them makes parts feel "placed". Well done on the concept though.
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