A blog created by the students and teacher at Mount Wachusett CC - Graphic and Interactive Design Department for the purposes of sharing and critiquing their artwork as a collaborative project.
Mason – We spoke about these this week in class, and so I’m not going to repeat what was said there. But an additional thought might be to look at the series, at some point, and think about the colors of each fitting into an overall color palette. I enjoy the colors of both of these, and yet wonder if they should/could be more alike in the overall tone of the colors. #1 is a muted color scheme and #2 is quite a bit brighter. I think this is something to consider as you move into #3 image.
Also, I notice a pink elephant and tree in #1. #2 does not seem to include an element that appears surrealistically colored. Maybe it should.
Reminder – blurring the figures may not be needed.
The headline design works really well… not sure you’ve resolved the logo placement in each yet.
Looking forward to seeing the whole series up here soon for feedback.
You're getting down to final tweaks and they are definitely getting to be more of a series with the falling people and weird pieces. Is there any way you could match up the location of the tagline? Very well done.
Mason – We spoke about these this week in class, and so I’m not going to repeat what was said there. But an additional thought might be to look at the series, at some point, and think about the colors of each fitting into an overall color palette. I enjoy the colors of both of these, and yet wonder if they should/could be more alike in the overall tone of the colors. #1 is a muted color scheme and #2 is quite a bit brighter. I think this is something to consider as you move into #3 image.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I notice a pink elephant and tree in #1. #2 does not seem to include an element that appears surrealistically colored. Maybe it should.
Reminder – blurring the figures may not be needed.
The headline design works really well… not sure you’ve resolved the logo placement in each yet.
Looking forward to seeing the whole series up here soon for feedback.
I will remind you, however, that the format needs to be vertical to fit a full page advertisement size.
ReplyDeleteYou're getting down to final tweaks and they are definitely getting to be more of a series with the falling people and weird pieces. Is there any way you could match up the location of the tagline? Very well done.
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