A blog created by the students and teacher at Mount Wachusett CC - Graphic and Interactive Design Department for the purposes of sharing and critiquing their artwork as a collaborative project.
Great design, font works great. Would like to see the logo, and possible motion on the earths? So it looks like you are moving through space,other than that great job.
I love the idea of being able the stand by a huge window a just gaze out on the sheer size of the earth below. This has a very serene feeling and I love it, a tranquil flight over earth seems amazing. Though you could throw some stars behind the earth, give it that "vastness of space" feel. or maybe the sun cresting over the top.
Nicholas – this is a good start to build on, and I think it could be helpful to hear what a viewer sees. This is what I see:
My eyes skip over the large dark hand at left because I don’t understand who it is, and am a bit worried that it is someone outside the window trying desperately to get back in. I see a line of street-dressed people, facing away from me in dark silhouette casually staring out a huge wall/window in an empty room that is devoid of chairs, or any other type of furniture. I see an Earth outside of each window… as if there were 2 Earths, unconnected to each other.
Questions: Are your passengers (who have just paid a lot of money for this ride) going to be standing or reclining as they travel? Will there be food and amenities like drink, etc? Your potential audience is the everyday person… or someone from the top 1% income level?
My first impression is that this looks a lot like the Star Trek bridge. Consider creating a new environment, one that meets the needs of your upscale clientele. Do you think one of your competitors might be first class airline travel? Maybe the Trump plane itself? (grin)
I think it would be wise to capitalize on the view that the customer would be seeing but also the luxurious interior. This could be shown in one of the other 2 designs now that I think about it. Also don't forget about your logo!
Great design, font works great. Would like to see the logo, and possible motion on the earths? So it looks like you are moving through space,other than that great job.
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ReplyDeleteI love the idea of being able the stand by a huge window a just gaze out on the sheer size of the earth below. This has a very serene feeling and I love it, a tranquil flight over earth seems amazing. Though you could throw some stars behind the earth, give it that "vastness of space" feel. or maybe the sun cresting over the top.
ReplyDeleteNicholas – this is a good start to build on, and I think it could be helpful to hear what a viewer sees. This is what I see:
ReplyDeleteMy eyes skip over the large dark hand at left because I don’t understand who it is, and am a bit worried that it is someone outside the window trying desperately to get back in. I see a line of street-dressed people, facing away from me in dark silhouette casually staring out a huge wall/window in an empty room that is devoid of chairs, or any other type of furniture. I see an Earth outside of each window… as if there were 2 Earths, unconnected to each other.
Questions: Are your passengers (who have just paid a lot of money for this ride) going to be standing or reclining as they travel? Will there be food and amenities like drink, etc? Your potential audience is the everyday person… or someone from the top 1% income level?
My first impression is that this looks a lot like the Star Trek bridge. Consider creating a new environment, one that meets the needs of your upscale clientele. Do you think one of your competitors might be first class airline travel? Maybe the Trump plane itself? (grin)
I think it would be wise to capitalize on the view that the customer would be seeing but also the luxurious interior. This could be shown in one of the other 2 designs now that I think about it. Also don't forget about your logo!
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