TRI-AGAIN
Tired of bad events like spilling coffee on yourself and
others. Want a second chance at that important job interview. TRI-AGAIN is here
to help you get that job you could have gotten the first time around.
Target Audience- Average
grown-ups with daily jobs, that don’t often change and have minimum amount of
money laying around. Our audience is average day grown-ups of all ages
ranging from 18+ with a stable legal job in any field, must be financially
stable in this current timeline.
Our service includes-
Life fixes, and life improvements. My service is provided to anyone who has no
major criminal history on current time lines. We time travel to events that
only happen within 30 months. Our specially trained timeline agent a
highly successful life fixer, with hundreds of years of experience in time travel,
space-time continuum, and combat skills.
He or She will go back in time, with your
active mind, to help you’re past self or loved one to change a negative outcome
to a positive. Ranging from any event even accidental death. We don’t do
business with anyone convicted of any criminal content ever. Your success is
our key and is special in which we do mathematics to assure that we don’t doom
us all.
Why is this needed? To
give the average human being a second chance at being successful with our added
help. What I know? Is our client is
hard working people who had an unfortunate event happen that changed their life
radically. Side effects would include major flash-forward and flash-back syndrome
from mind going back in time.
Imagery would be special effects time-line graphics Photoshop’ed
with before & after time travel seen. Happy guy or girl jump for joy on a
graphic of clock spinning etc.
Have any suggestions please comment
Carl: Well written and clear. I enjoy the “Side Effects” statement… much like the Surgeon General’s Warning on cigarettes. I think you should add a warning label to your ads!
ReplyDeleteKeep thinking about the Imagery section. What else could be happening within the imagery? Because you have a series to consider, maybe using different persons within your target audience would be good? How could what they wear help us know what unfortunate thing happened to them in the past? (Prisoners in stripes, etc). Could they be looking behind themselves, as if looking towards the past?
A before and after concept is just one idea, and maybe not as compelling as “suggesting” the past problem but showing a wonderful future? The spinning clock is a great idea – whether they are dancing on it or it simply figures into the composition in other ways. Keep thinking.
You state "no major criminal history on current time lines." then add "We don’t do business with anyone convicted of any criminal content ever." Does something like getting caught drinking at 18 (Not major but still a crime) bar you from this service? Other than that small nit-pick it looks like you have a pretty thorough idea of what you're going for, well done.
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