A blog created by the students and teacher at Mount Wachusett CC - Graphic and Interactive Design Department for the purposes of sharing and critiquing their artwork as a collaborative project.
I like both the images, "design the future" I feel needs to have something behind it. I also like placement of your logo in both images. Especially on the air craft, it gives a perspective within the image.
Nick - this is starting to get really interesting! I'm wondering, however, how you can make this "series" hold together as a series. Currently there are 3 different approaches - to show the experience on deck in space (#1), to show the vehicle itself (#2), and lastly in #3 to show an interior space without people. Which approach would speak more clearly to your audience? What would excite them to actually buy a ticket? The series should actually be using 1 concept but visualized in 3 ways. That's what a "series" is... 1 concept applied to 3 different images.
I'm thinking that #1 might be your choice, which means you are going to show us what we can expect on the ride. So... I'll give you more feedback there.
Sounds great, I understand better now for the interior of the aircraft and the image "series" concept. I will have some more posted soon based on the suggestions. Thank you much for all the suggestions and ideas very helpful and I appreciate your guidance.
I like it, the concept is pretty clear, very good job. I noticed that the ship you show doesn't have an oval window like the interior image. But that's just me being nit-picky, they could be different models for all I know.
I like both the images, "design the future" I feel needs to have something behind it. I also like placement of your logo in both images. Especially on the air craft, it gives a perspective within the image.
ReplyDeleteNick - this is starting to get really interesting! I'm wondering, however, how you can make this "series" hold together as a series. Currently there are 3 different approaches - to show the experience on deck in space (#1), to show the vehicle itself (#2), and lastly in #3 to show an interior space without people. Which approach would speak more clearly to your audience? What would excite them to actually buy a ticket? The series should actually be using 1 concept but visualized in 3 ways. That's what a "series" is... 1 concept applied to 3 different images.
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking that #1 might be your choice, which means you are going to show us what we can expect on the ride. So... I'll give you more feedback there.
Sounds great, I understand better now for the interior of the aircraft and the image "series" concept. I will have some more posted soon based on the suggestions. Thank you much for all the suggestions and ideas very helpful and I appreciate your guidance.
DeleteI like it, the concept is pretty clear, very good job. I noticed that the ship you show doesn't have an oval window like the interior image. But that's just me being nit-picky, they could be different models for all I know.
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