A blog created by the students and teacher at Mount Wachusett CC - Graphic and Interactive Design Department for the purposes of sharing and critiquing their artwork as a collaborative project.
Keep thinking about the color combination at the top of the ads... still think the blue is a "calming" influence in what should be a high energy event. The type is too high along the top edge... pull it down so you have a margin along the top. The translucent white area behind the logo isn't working quite yet either. I see the curve of the blue behind it... which is distracting and compromises the logo.
Look at the colors in the wonderful texture you have introduced to all the scenes... there are lots of colors there to try behind the heading. Hmmm... I wonder if that colorful texture, at 100%, could be the background with white type sitting on top of it?
More experimentation needs to happen. Choose one ad, and solve this issue and only then apply it to the rest. Post that one solution for comment/feedback.It will save you time.
The blue is a calm color I agree, perhaps a more exciting color can add to this. The curve on the shape above i think is what ties your ads together most, stick with it.
Keep thinking about the color combination at the top of the ads... still think the blue is a "calming" influence in what should be a high energy event. The type is too high along the top edge... pull it down so you have a margin along the top. The translucent white area behind the logo isn't working quite yet either. I see the curve of the blue behind it... which is distracting and compromises the logo.
ReplyDeleteLook at the colors in the wonderful texture you have introduced to all the scenes... there are lots of colors there to try behind the heading. Hmmm... I wonder if that colorful texture, at 100%, could be the background with white type sitting on top of it?
More experimentation needs to happen. Choose one ad, and solve this issue and only then apply it to the rest. Post that one solution for comment/feedback.It will save you time.
The blue is a calm color I agree, perhaps a more exciting color can add to this. The curve on the shape above i think is what ties your ads together most, stick with it.
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