Monday, September 26, 2016

Part1 reworked/part2


TRI-AGAIN

Tired of bad events like spilling coffee on yourself and others. Want a second chance at that important job interview. Well TRI-AGAIN is here to help you get that job you could have gotten the first time around.

Target Audience-  Grown-ups with daily jobs, that don’t often change and have minimum amount of money laying around. Our service includes life fixes, beating up dark alley thugs, and life improvements. My service is provided to anyone who has no major criminal history on current time lines. We time travel to events that only happen within 30 days. Why is this needed? To give the average human being a second chance at being successful with our added help. What I know? Is our client is hard working people who had an unfortunate event happen that changed their life radically.

 Closest Competitors would be

 

who is a source for deep thinkers, lifelong learners and truth seekers.


 
 Part2
 TRI-AGAIN for $350 our specially trained timeline agent a highly successful life fixer, with hundreds of years of experience in time travel, space time continuum, and combat skills. Well send our agent, your mind and thoughts back in time, to help your past self or loved one to change a negative outcome to a positive. Ranging from any event even accidental death. Unless you been rightfully convicted of any criminal content ever. Your success is our key and is special in which we do mathematics to assure that we don’t doom us all. Our audience is average day grown-ups of all ages ranging from 18+ with a stable legal job in any field, and have minimum amount of money laying around. Must be financially stable in this current timeline.
 
 
 
 

3 comments:

  1. One of the most high tech of the ideas, I like that. There are literally thousands of questions that could be posed about time travel alone but you have a very sure and professional pitch that makes it seem like you have all of their answers. Well done.

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  2. I really like the idea, but a question I have is what about creating a time paradox? If you send someone back to change an event, than the original event never happened meaning that the person doesn't need to hire your services to begin with, you never know to send someone back and the customer never pays you. How would you deal with that? Food for thought.

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  3. Carl – I can see that you are thinking this through, to the extend possible at this time (and in this timeline). My only concern is the “thug” aspect of this. If you are offering to go back in time to beat someone up… that could be considered illegal… so maybe you want to drop that aspect of your product. It is starting to sound like you have agents whose bodies will actually do the time travel, taking your clients’ minds with them. Is this true? If so – please figure out how why no one would be fooled into thinking they are your client. Bodies have to be similar… some how. That said, I really like the way this is going.

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